Saturday, July 28, 2007 |
Tightrope |
Balanced, precariously. One wrong step and it's all over, plummeting downwards. Everything balanced. Such an effort to keep upright, keep everything together. Pushed and pulled, shaken. Can't see what to hold on to.
Unbalanced. I sense myself falling. Can I stop it? Do I embrace the blackness? Or fight it? Too tired to fight, the embrace calls out to me, I long to fall into its deceptive charms, a siren call of lies dressed up all pretty.
But I must fight. |
posted by Calia77 @ 12:22 pm |
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Oh dear my friend. Dont fall free, fall into the onec arms who loves you. Jesus loves you. Maybe you think I am a fool to writhe this to you. In that case am happy to be a fool for you
I know pain, I know how life can hurt. But there is a way, believe, please
an unknown friend to you now, sofia
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Jo
We all need each other and if I can encouraging you a bit a would be happy to do so. maybe you do it for me the next time.
By the way, you have a nice blog. I will put you in my bloggroll so I can make small visit now and then. IsnĀ“t it nice when people visit us Jo?
I work on the art-thing all the time. I trye to make my point where I am lack of english words. All ways goes to Rom they say, hahaha
sofia/ the same as above
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I couldn`t leave a comment on your poetryblog, sorry ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
you do write beautiful poems Jo. I myself is an poet so I think I can se that an tell...
You should try to put some of them toghether and one day maybe you can send me a book
The thing you have written as an explanation why you write is very good. Even if I can read in the pain is it exacly what a etablished poet would say or write
greetings sofia
Have patiens with my english it is many ops when I write in your L
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Well, now is the time to hold on - it was not for nothing that you called this blog 'Shatterproof' and while I will say that this may not be the worst time of this year (only over half way) you still have to understand that you can be more than you were the day before.
It is a dangerous thing to see your exes and your crushes girlfriends' as merely 'eye candy' - or worse, understandable as it is - you're hurting and that is good to be able to feel [far worse when you are so deadened to the pain you no longer feel it] but you should try to see them as more than that - as you should also see yourself as more than that.
If we did not want something we would not be tempted by it - and therein lies the appeal to try to taste as much as you can without being caught up in it... Like a child trying to pinch sweeties in a candy store...
In the end, I would like to see you loving yourself as God loves you and while it may take time to be able to face yourself - do not worry about how others see you. Be reassured by how many folk care for you and by God's love for you.
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Very well written poem, I could feel your anguish. Hope things "balance out" soon. Hugs to you.
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Oh dear my friend. Dont fall free, fall into the onec arms who loves you. Jesus loves you. Maybe you think I am a fool to writhe this to you. In that case am happy to be a fool for you
I know pain, I know how life can hurt. But there is a way, believe, please
an unknown friend to you now, sofia